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Wharton School of Business

Application Essay 1

 

Yosuke Tanaka

February 15, 2004

 

              I hope to earn an MBA so that I can return to my career in the Japanese Cabinet Office with an advanced and systematized knowledge of management, finance, economics and statistics.  I am anxious to serve as an effective senior manager of my organization in the future and my early career in the Japanese government has convinced me that these skills will be essential as I assume positions of greater leadership and responsibility.

              My experience at the Cabinet Secretariat (where I was on loan from the Cabinet Office) was the first that impressed upon me the importance of managerial skills for effective government work. In Japan, the Cabinet Secretariat is responsible for coordinating and managing the various government ministries as well as troubleshooting Cabinet administration problems as they come along. With the January 2001 reorganization of Japan’s cabinet and government ministries, the Cabinet Secretariat gained more power in managing and overseeing the ministries, which in the past had been much more autonomous. As an official in the Cabinet Secretariat, I had the opportunity to participate directly in this reorganization and headed a project to redesign government conferences led by the Prime Minister or Cabinet to suit the new cabinet and ministry structure. After the reorganization, I managed the meetings of Cabinet Ministers, Senior Vice-Ministers and other high level government officials. My duties at the Cabinet Secretariat also included overseeing the disclosure of public documents and information under Japan’s Freedom of Information Act.

              The newly strengthened Cabinet Secretariat, in aiding the Prime Minister, has the complicated and important task of managing and coordinating the activities of various ministries.  As an official in the Cabinet Secretariat, I saw how important it is to have comprehensive business management skills. As the power of the government is becoming more centralized and concentrated with the prime minister and cabinet, leadership and management skills have become extremely important for cabinet officials. Only with these skills can I hope to effectively manage and lead the Cabinet Office as it does the important work of coordinating the activities of the various ministries of the Japanese government.

             My second experience, my current position working at the Department of Business Statistics (part of the Economic and Social Research Institute which is in turn part of the Cabinet Office), also made me see the great value of gaining the knowledge and skills that come with an MBA.  The Cabinet Office, in coordinating the activities of the various ministries in governing the country, is particularly concerned with improving economic conditions in Japan.  When making economic decisions, the Cabinet Office, with advice from my department, must accurately assess the economic climate in Japan. To this end, my department calculates and publishes statistics on business conditions. To analyze and accurately evaluate the business conditions I have been collecting, one needs a sophisticated knowledge of economics and statistics.  Though I have gained some knowledge of these subjects, I did not have the opportunity to study them academically, as I majored in law. I believe I will gain a much better understanding of economics and statistics by earning an MBA. With the flexibility of studies the MBA program offers, I will be able to concentrate on those areas most relevant to my career.

              Now more than ever, as Japan is going through difficult times economically, I am motivated to do whatever I can to help my country.  After completing graduate business study, I would like to return to my career at the Cabinet Office. The Cabinet Office, I believe, has a large role in solving Japan’s problems, as it can coordinate the ministries and carry out policies that are pivotal to the recovery of Japan’s economy. I am thrilled to be a part of this organization and its important role in governing my country, and I am anxious to take on positions of greater leadership and responsibility in the future.

As an administrative unit leader in my department, I realize that to best lead the Cabinet Office, I need to increase my knowledge of management, finance, statistics and economics through MBA study. I am particularly interested in Wharton’s program because of your curriculum’s strength in statistics, financial analysis and other areas important to my career in the Japanese government. I am especially looking forward to taking your courses on Macroeconomic Analysis and Public Policy, The Governmental and Legal Environment of Business, Managerial Economics, Statistical Analysis for Management, and Management Communication. I believe that an MBA from your excellent program offers the unique opportunity to supplement the professional experience I already have and return to my office with the knowledge and skills I need to serve as an enlightened and effective cabinet leader in the future.